Friday, June 25, 2010

Tom's BIG jump!

I am surprised that I went up 2 whole levels in my persuasive writing in two terms. Now I'm working at a 4P level and I was working at a 2A level. When 3 teachers were marking my writing, they started laughing - I feel pleased that I got my own teacher laughing and 2 others.

I reckon I improved because I practise twice a week at home, and at school we have practised to do paragraphs, punctuation and use Martion Luther King as an exemplar.

Here is the start of my persuasive writing:

In 2011 the Year 7's should go on the great Awhitu Camp, becasue it's just great. You get away from nagging parents and the teachers stop being bossy.
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